Friday 19 June 2020

cuz story ending

The Ending of Cuz WALtives in our writing HT: use interesting adjecSelf Assessment 😀😀😀😀 I can add words that describe what I can see (shape, colour, size) I can add words that when it was night time river was cold. so was huia. River made a fire with some sticks and rocks.When he lit the fire he was tired so he slept a little bit. when he woke up it was raining and he watched the fire blow away he was crying. and praying. in the morning huia said are you alright river. river was cold and he said no. huia said i heard you crying. river said yea. as the cold wind would freeze them every time. river whent to go find some water when river was at the water. river was shocked to see a helicopter he was waving and shouting but he gave up river went back to huia river was angry and tired that huia was gone he searched everywhere but nothing after 2 days river was in a cage he found huia and the were hugging they spent in the cage for 3 days until a man came and said he was gonna freeze huia and river he laugh and turn on the light they saw that the were in a freezer huia was intimidated. river found out he had a padlock he unlock the cage and got out when they were out they saw 100s of boets river and huia wipe there eye making sure they weren't seeing this but the boets weren't there there was a dark shadow it had red eyes and it chased them river fell on the ground and huia fainted river got scared the man was close to river the man said why are you running river said you were chasing us the man helped river up and huia was still on the ground but huia wock up the next day huia was in the boet river said morning they finally arrived back home. escribe what I can feel (fluffy / soft) I can add words that describe what I could hear (loud, quiet) ` I can add words that describe what I could smell (sour, sweet, fresh)

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